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A little Tokyo October 19th The sky is clear. I found a nice flat house recently. That's located at near the city and some restaurants and shops around there. I think that's a clean/cute room. The house rent it low! This house is the best that I thought. But the owner said "I living in this house with 5 flat mates. All of them are Japanese girls!" Oh no. It seems like a little Tokyo, isn't it? Although it's a lovely house I decided not to go there. Because I reary want to improve my english!

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A little Tokyo

October 19th
The sky is clear.

I found a nice flat shared house recently, That's (located) at near the city, and with some restaurants and shops nearby/around there. I think that's it is a clean and attractive/cute room, and the (house) rent it is low!
I thought that this house is the best that I have seen/come across, thought. but the owner said that "I would be living in this house with 5 flat mates, and all of them are Japanese girls!"
Oh no !  It seems like a little Tokyo, isdoesn't it?
Although it's a lovely house, I decided not to go there, because I really want to improve my English!

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A little "Tokyo"

October 19th
The weather is fine.

I found a nice share house recently, located near the city with some restaurants and shops nearby. I thought it was a clean/cute room. The house rent is low!
This house is the best that I have seen, but the owner said to me, "I'm living in this house with 5 flat mates. All of them are Japanese girls!"
Oh no. It seems like a little too "Tokyo", doesn't it?
Although it's a lovely house I decided not to move there because I really want to improve my english!

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If I stay with Japanese people, we will talk in Japanese. I heard that a lot of Japanese people gave up to speak English. So I want to live with native speakers.
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I'm also curious how living with 5 other girls is like living in Tokyo. And why does that mean it would be hard to improve your English?
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Thank you for your message. Please read the Reinhard's correction. He is great. Sorry for my terrible writing.

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