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What leads to success ? Hi everyone ! Can you help me to correct this, please ? And leave a comment to give your ideas about what leads to success and why do people succeed. ;) Thanks !! I think they are different ways to lead to success but all of them are very important. First, we need to push ourselves to stop to think "I am to shy to do that", "I am not smart enough to do that" or "I won't be able to do that". We need to have more self- confidence. Sometimes it is not easy to push ourselves so we sometimes need other people to help us, like family or good friends. It is always good to be surrounded by positive people. Secondly, to succeed is not an easy target so we need a lot of hardwork and practice. We need time to succeed, to find good ideas and to be better in what we want to be good at. You also need a good organisation. In my opinion, we need to be well organise if you want to achieve a goal faster but in doing it well. It is easier when it is your passion. Like we say: "follow what you love and you will love what you do". Indeed, you will spend a lot of time to achieve your goals, if you like what you do, you will always find time to do it and you will have motivation. In the contrary, if it is something which is not that important for you, you will use to procrastinate it, to say I can do it tomorrow, but it is not an attitude that leads to success. Thirdly, you must be ready to do some sacrifices. Actually, you will spend a lot of time to study or work, it means for example to go out less often than before. I don't say that we must stop to live, in the contrary ! But to put more chance in our side to succeed. And it is some sacrifices now, but it is to do what we want in the future. Finally, over all, I think that the main idea to succeed is to persit. Indeed, it is difficult to do well on the first time. We will have to face problems on our road to success but the most important is to always learn from our mistakes, change it and try again. We are not superheroes, genious or in the american movies, we are only humans. We will have to face criticisms and failures but we must never forget our goal. These are my ideas on how to succeed, what are yours ?

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What leads to success ?

Hi everyone ! Can you help me to correct this, please ? And leave a comment to give share your ideas about what leads to success and why do people succeed. ;) Thanks !!

I think they are different ways to paths lead to success but all of them are very important. First, we need to push ourselves to stop to think and stop thinking "I am too shy to do that", "I am not smart enough to do that" or "I won't be able to do that". We need to have more self-confidence. Sometimes it is not easy to push ourselves so we sometimes need other people to help us, like family or good friends. It is always good to be surrounded by positive people.

Secondly, to succeed success is not easy an easy target so we need a lot of hard work and practice. We need time to succeed, to find good ideas and to be better improve in what we want to be good at. You also need to be well-organized a good organisation. In my opinion, we you need to be well-organised if you want to achieve a goal faster but in still doing it well. It is easier when it is your passion. Like we sayIt is often said: "follow what you love and you will love what you do". Indeed, you will spend a lot of time to achieve your goals; but if you like what you do, you will always find time to do it and you will have the motivation. In To the contrary, if it is something which that is not that important for you, you will use to procrastinate it, to you will say "I can do it tomorrow"; but it this is not an attitude that leads to success.

Thirdly, you must be ready to do make some sacrifices. Actually, you will spend a lot of time studying or working; to study or work, it means, for example, to you will go out less often than before. I don't say I'm not saying that we must stop living to live, in , on the contrary! But I am saying that we need to put more chance in our side to luck in our favor to succeed. And it is some There are some sacrifices now, but it is to do they will allow us to do what we want in the future. Finally, over all, I think that the main idea secret to succeed success is to persit persistance. Indeed, it is difficult to do well on the first time. We will have to face problems on our road to success but the most important thing is to always learn from our mistakes, change it make changes, and try again. We are not superheroes, geniuses or in the American movies, we are only humans. We will have to face criticisms and failures but we must never forget our goal.


These are my ideas on how to succeed, what are yours ?

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