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Everyone's own space I think everyone has to have his own space in a couple. I am talking about time for your hoobies and activities that you like to practice or attend. This space sometime disappier living in couple and that percentage increase when you have children. If a member of the couple is egoist in this issue, he or she will try to make the other leave his hoobies. I know that when you live in couple you will get new activities shared with the other, and that is true, but in the other hand if you "tight" too much the other member, soon or later, the rug is going to break. Thanks for your corrections.

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Everyone's own space

I think everyone has to have his own space in a couple. I am talking about time for your hoobies and activities (that) you like to practice or attend. This space sometime disappears living in couple and that percentage increases when you have children. If a member of the couple is egoist on this issue, he or she will try to make the other leave his/her hoobies. I know that when you live in couple you will share new activities () with the other, and that is true, but in the other hand if you "fasten" too tight the other member, sooner or later, the rug is going to break.
Thanks for your corrections.

 

"Tight" no es un verbo, así que no lo puedes utilizar como lo hacías. Justo es el adverbio más acorde con "fasten", que es lo que significa "amarrar". No estoy muy seguro con "on this issue", quizás pueda ser "in this issue", pero me "suena" mejor "on".

Buen trabajo!  Saludos.

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Everyone's own space

I think everyone has to have their own space in a couple. I am talking about time for the hobbies and activities that you like to practice or attend. This space sometimes disappears when you are living in a couple and that percentage increases when you have children.

 

If a member of the couple is egoist in this issue, he or she will try to make the other leave his hobbies. I know that when you live in a couple you will get new activities which you share with the other person, and that is true, but on the other hand if you "control" the other member too much , soon or later, the relationship is going to break.


Thanks for your corrections.

 

Hello Javier,

 

I think that this space probably often disappears as there are more and more demands on your time. Just a few small problems but I can understand everything.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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