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Essay endangered species Nowadays, It is not a mystery that tigers, polar bears, whales and many other animal species are facing a brutal fate. Sadly and unsurprisingly, many of these endangered species are going to disappear very soon from the Earth’s ecosystem, if nothing will be done to prevent it from happening. According to experts, this depressing reality is due to different factors such as illegal hunting, offshore drilling, pollution and everything else that contributes to create the climate change that the world is experiencing in these years. One solution is to teach to people how to help conserve wildlife. This goal could be achieved in many ways, for instance, schools could include lessons regarding the use of green energy technologies and how to consume more consciously in their programs, in order that people would become more aware of their environmental footprint. Furthermore, media could show more frequently reports and detailed news about this issue and therefore incite the public to debate. Another essential approach would be to create protected areas for endangered species, where it could be possible to recreate their natural habitat. It would help animals to recover and to increase their population level. Obviously, these areas should be very well monitored, safe from illegal hunters and far from factories of big cities. Both approaches could have a big impact on the attempt to save many species from extinction, on balance, however, I would say that there is no more time to waste and it is urgent to create more protected zones, because it is fundamental to allow animals to reproduce safely.

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An Essay on Endangered Species

 

Nowadays, It is not a mystery that tigers, polar bears, whales and many other animal species are facing a brutal fate. Sadly and unsurprisingly, many of these endangered species are going to disappear very soon from the Earth’s ecosystem, if nothing can be done to prevent it from happening. According to experts, this depressing reality is due to a range of different factors. These include illegal hunting, offshore drilling, pollution and other issues that contribute to the world's climate change problem.


One solution is to teach to people how to help conserve wildlife. This goal could be achieved in many ways, for instance, schools could include lessons regarding the use of green energy technologies and how to consume more consciously in their programs, so that people would become more aware of their ecological-footprint. Furthermore, the media could more frequently feature detailed reports and news on this issue; this would open-up public debate on wildlife conservation.


Another important approach would be to create protected areas for endangered species, where it would be possible to recreate their natural habitat. It would help animals to recover and to recover and increase their population levels. Obviously, these areas should be very well monitored, safe from illegal hunters and far from the big city's factories.


Both approaches could have a big impact on the attempt to save many species from extinction. However, I would say that there is no more time to waste and it is urgent to create more protected zones. These zones are fundamental to allow animals to recover previous population levels.

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This is really well written, Luca :) I've just put in a few suggested tweaks below to help it read more naturally. Ben fatto!

 

Essay endangered species

Nowadays, It is widely known that tigers, polar bears, whales and many other animal species are facing a brutal fate. Sadly and unsurprisingly, many of these endangered species are going to disappear very soon from the Earth’s ecosystem, if nothing is done to prevent it from happening. According to experts, this depressing reality is due to different factors such as illegal hunting, offshore drilling, pollution and everything else that contributes to creating the climate change that the world is currently experiencing.
One solution is to teach people how to help conserve wildlife. This goal could be achieved in many ways, for instance, schools could include lessons in their curricula regarding the use of green energy technologies and how to consume more consciously, so that people become more aware of their environmental footprint. Furthermore, the media could more frequently show reports and detailed news about this issue and therefore incite the public to debate.
Another essential approach would be to create protected areas for endangered species, where it could be possible to recreate their natural habitat. It would help animals to recover and to increase their population level. Obviously, these areas would have to be very well monitored, safe from illegal hunters and far from factories and big cities.
Both approaches could have a big impact on the attempt to save many species from extinction. On balance, however, I would say that there is no more time to waste and it is urgent to create more protected zones, because it is fundamental to allow animals to reproduce safely.

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I really like the way you started your essay, very attractive and thus, aroused readers' curiosity :)

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