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ODOR-气味- ODOR A few new frames come to my home They are made by pine These guys Declare their existence by their smell, Smell Occasionally appear and disappear that give me an illusion i feel like i'm in the forest and the mountains as a fairy But there's no moisture and oxygen-rich fresh Suddenly, the odors of ginger and chicken surge from the my neighbor's kitchen In one second i back to earth. -气味- 家里来了几只相框, 松木做的, 这些家伙 以气味宣示自己的存在, 偶尔散来 让人产生置身山林 要做道仙的错觉, 只是少了那潮湿和富氧的清爽 忽然一股姜葱鸡的气味从对楼厨房袭来, 一秒把人拉回人间。

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ODOR-气味-

ODOR
A few new frames come to/arrive at my home
They are made by of/from pine
These guys
Declare their presence/existence by their fragrance/smell,
Smell which occasionally comes and goes/[appears and disappears]
that gives me the/an illusion that . .
I feel as though/like I'm in the forest, and the mountains, as if (I am) a fairy
[*But there's no moisture], and in the oxygen-rich freshness, but there's no moisture  [*transpose]
Suddenly, the odors of ginger and chicken surge from the my neighbor's kitchen. 
In one second I am back to earth.

Nice writing.  They say you shouldn't correct poetry, so I've just made some suggestions.

 

 

-气味-
家里来了几只相框,
松木做的,
这些家伙
以气味宣示自己的存在,
偶尔散来
让人产生置身山林
要做道仙的错觉,
只是少了那潮湿和富氧的清爽
忽然一股姜葱鸡的气味从对楼厨房袭来,
一秒把人拉回人间。

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oxygen-rich fresh it's full of oxygen, so fresh.
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i am also love english but it's less chance to use it.
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could you tell me rich fresh meaning? i could not understand

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