Life an and work

Which one is more important between life and work?
Perhaps, different people have different opinions. People who worship freedom maybe give up a stable job and look forward to funny life. On the other side, people will choose tough tasks for money or ambitions. But I don't think that those these two types take a large percentage among the whole.
Most people have the similar felling feeling that we will be eager to work when the vacation is too long, and will be eager for holiday if the working is too busy. It seems that we cann't have a reasonable life when the balance between life and work is lost. Life is important ,so does is work.
For me, both life and work are crucial too. Work is not only just a method to support ordinary expenditure but also improves communication with society. And the communication with other people will influence one's life directly. And life can affect work positively when it is hamony and colorful. it has harmony.
There is no reason to escape from life and work. All we need is living and working by heart.

In English, it doesn't make a lot of sense to say a relationship between two things is colorful, so I would just say it has harmony. Besides that, your writing is great! Keep at it!

Life and work

Which one is more important, life or work?

Different people have different opinions. People who worship freedom might give up a stable job and look forward to a fun life. On the other hand, some people choose tough tasks for money or their ambitions. But I don't think that these two types are a large percentage of the whole.

Most people become eager to work when the vacation is too long, and will be eager for holiday if the working is too busy. It seems that we can't have a reasonable life when work and life aren't balanced. Life is important, and so is work.

For me, both life and work are crucial. Work is not only a method to support myself, but it also improves communication with society. Communication with others improves my life. Life affects work positively when it is harmonious and colorful.

There is no reason to escape from life and work. All we need is living and working with heart.