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Morning train Today's morning I overslept and was nearly late for a compulsory subject in first period. Eventually I managed to get to college in time, but the train which is a bit of later than the one ordinarily I use was so crowded. Many people had already gotten on, and after I got on, dozens of people came into like an avalanche at every station. I think the reason the train was so crowded is not only it was just the time many people usually leave home and go to their school or office, but also it has been raining since this morning. Anyway, I determined not to stay up late and oversleep from now on.

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Morning train

Today's This morning I overslept and was nearly late for a compulsory subject in first period.
Eventually, I managed to get to college on time, but the train which is a bit of later than the one than the one I ordinarily I use was so crowded. Many people had already gotten on, and after I got on, dozens of people came into entered/got on like an avalanche at every station.
I think the reason the train was so crowded is not only it was just the time many people usually leave home and go to their schools or offices, but also it had been raining since this morning. Anyway, I determined not to stay up late and oversleep from now on.

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Morning train

Today's morning I overslept and was nearly late for a compulsory subject in the first period.
Eventually I managed to get to college in time, but the train which is a bit of later than the one ordinarily I ordinarily use was so crowded. Many people had already gotten on, and after I got on, dozens of people came into it like an avalanche at every station.
I think the reason the train was so crowded is was because not only it was just the time many people usually leave home and go to their schools or offices, but also it has been raining since this morning. Anyway, I am determined not to stay up late and oversleep from now on.

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