Composition, English Classes, Review 8
Tomorrow I'll have a test at school, so, I need to write about college education. The topics are:
- Where you want to attend college
- The college major you'd like to study
- Why you choose this major
- How it will help you
College Education
A college major it's a big step to a person because knowledge can help very much to find a good profession and also being a good professional. I would like join in a college. When I was child, I would love to be an archeologist, but today, I could try something more simple, like a design couse.
Would be cool to attend in an federal university, likes UFMG but I'm not prepared to try this, because there is a long time I finished highschool... and I'm not studying currently.
To attend in a college could help me leave my job, and make some money drawing, or creating cool things. To be a little more free that I usually am.
Please, I need help! the test is tomorrow morning! Did I make many mistakes?
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Composition, English Classes, Review 8
Tomorrow I have a test at school, so I need to write about college education. The topics are:
- Where you want to attend college
- The college major you'd like to study
- Why you choose this major
- How it will help you
College Education
A college major is a big step for a person because knowledge can help very much to find a good profession and also being a good professional. I would like to go to college. When I was a child, I wanted to be an archeologist, but today, I could try something simpler, like a design couse.
It would be cool to attend a federal university, like UFMG but I'm not prepared to try this, because it's been a while since I finished highschool... and I'm not studying currently.
Attending college could help me leave my job and make some money by drawing or by creating cool things. To be a little more free that I usually am (What do you mean here?).
Please, I need help! the test is tomorrow morning! Did I make many mistakes?
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