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Winter аnd puppies. Today in my township winter came! The temperature today - 5 ° C Dropped a lot of snow. He covered the all the trees and roads. My friends and I built a snowman. Near my house lives a dog with seven puppies. They are about 4 months old. They сheerfully play in snow. We fed the puppies and went home to warm up.

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Выделяю ошибки красным, а стилистику синем.

Winter аnd puppies.

Winter came to my township [1] today! The temperature today was - 5°C.  A lot of snow fell. It covered the all the trees and roads. My friends and I built a snowman.
A dog with seven puppies live near my house. The puppies are about 4 months old. They play cheerfully in the snow. We fed the puppies, and went home to warm up.

 

[1]  I have never seen the word "township" used in connection with a Russian political unit. If you tell me the Russian word for your political unit, I will try to think of a better word in English.

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