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Travelling
Ever since I was young, I have had the opportunity to travel quite a lot. I still remember the first time that I took a flight which took me and my family to Cophenaghen, Denmark.
After that, I travelled with my family to several countries in and outside Europe and not, but with the passing years my way of travelling has changed.
Last time that I went abroad with my family abroad was 4 years ago, because I started travelling with friends or alone ( which is much more better ). In fact, after high school I have spent 4 beautiful months travelling around Australia, where I had met a large number of people whom I shared awesome experiences and stories.
Still today when I have time (and money, especially money), I always catch a flight to go somewhere and discover new places. Just a few weeks ago I came back from a trip in Ireland where, thanks to a website, I found a volunteer work in a hostel. It was an international enviroment which allowed me to keep my English trained ["sharp" might be better].
However, yesterday my mother tried to convince me to do a trip together with all the family. Should I do it?? I suppose yes, even if it will be not as interesting as travelling alone.
Very good! You have a strong grasp of English. Remember to put commas as periods directly next to the previous letter (which I have corrected throughout). Also always remember to capitilize the word "I". Good job! Yes, I think you should travel with your family :)
Traveling
Ever since I was young, I had the opportunity to travel a lot . I still remember the first time that I took a flight that brought my family and I to Cophenaghen, Denmark .
After that, i have traveled with my family to several countries in Europe. (and not, but with the passing years my way of travelling has changed.) Maybe you can say 'But in the passing years, I have not been able to travel as much.
Last time I went with my family abroad was 4 years ago because I started traveling with friends or alone (which is much better). In fact after high school, I spent 4 beautiful months traveling around Australia. There, I met a large number of people that i shared awesome experiences with .
Still today, when i have time ( and especially money ), I try to catch a flight to discover somewhere new . Just few weeks ago, I came back from a trip in Ireland. Thanks to a website , I found volunteer work in a Hostel. An international enviroment which provided me the opportunity to keep practicing my English.
However ,yesterday my mother tried to convice me to do a trip toghther with all the family . Should I do it ?? I suppose yes, even if it will be not as interesting as traveling alone .
Francesco, any travel is good! Keep on traveling and practicing English. PS your so lucky that you can travel to a whole new country so easily when you live in Europe. A presto!
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