Johana's family

My family is composed of Ms. Sandra, Mr. Joe, Jesus, and Richard. Ms. Sandra is my mother. She's 42, is a university student, a law student, and she work in a school. Mr. Joe is my father. He's 56, and is an advanced technician in accounting, but he works as a barber and lives in Colombia. Jesus and Ricardo are my younger brothers. Ricardo is a high school student and is 20, while Jesus is 22, he does not study, and likes games. They are my family, this is johana's family.

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In my family is ms. Sandra, mister Joe, Jesus and Richard. Ms. Sandra is my mother, she's 42. She is a university student, she is a law student, and she works in a school. Mr. Joe is my father, he's 56. He is an advanced technician in accounting but he is also a barber and lives in Colombia. Jesus and Ricardo are my younger brothers. Ricardo is a highschool student, he's 20, and jesus is 22. He does not study, instead he likes to play games. They are my family.