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I feel sorry to my mum This morning I did a thing that I regret most. Two days ago I bought some pomegranates and told my mum to eat, which I think it is good to her health. Today they are still on the table,not even one lessened. I complained about it, while my mum was complainting one of pomegranate was rotten. She always was apt to complaint what I bought was rotten. Sometimes it was the truth, while most times it was because she saved them for other family members and didn't eat before they are rotten. I hate this. I got angry then I did what I regret most - I picked up the pomegranate which she said I didn't buy rightly and threw it heavily to the floor. The big pomegranate cracked and deep purple red seeds were rolling all over the floor. I regret immediately and wished I Icould undo what I did. My mum was astonished and then cried. She let me buy a train ticket for her to return to her hometown. I told her I felt sorry but she was still sobbing when I left for work. I was really regreting for my bad temper. I should control it but I didn't. I confess I am stressed recently. I easily vented it to my mum my closed loved person. I hurt my mum. I don't know how to comfort her.

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I feel sorry tofor my mum

This morning I did a thing that I most regret most. Two days ago I bought some pomegranates and told my mum to eat them, whichbecause I think it is good tofor her health. Today they are still on the table, not even one lessened is gone. I complained about it, while my mum was complaintingcomplained that one of the pomegranates was rotten. She always was apt to complaint that what I bought was rotten. Sometimes it was the truth, while but most times it was they rotted because she saved them for other family members and didn't eat them before they rottedare rotten. I hate this. I got angry, then I did what I regret most--I picked up the pomegranate whichthat she said I didn't buy rightly and threw it hardheavily onto the floor. The big pomegranate cracked, and deep purple red seeds rolledwere rolling all over the floor.

I regretted it immediately and wished I Icould undo what I did. My mum was astonished and then cried. She let me buy a train ticket for her to return to her hometown. I told her I felt sorry, but she was still sobbing when I left for work.

I was really regreting for regretted my bad temper. I should have controlled it, but I didn't. I confess I am stressed recently that recently I have been stressed. I easily vented it to my mum, my closed closest loved person. I hurt my mum. I don't know how to comfort her.

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I feel sorry to my mum

This morning I did a thing that I regret most a lot. Two days ago I bought some pomegranates and told my mum to eat them, which I think it is good to for her health. Today they are still on the table,not even one lessened  tried. I complained about it, while but my mum was complainting complained that one of the pomegranates was rotten. She always was apt to complaint complains that what I bought was  buy is rotten. Sometimes it was is the truth, while most times it was is because she saved  saves them for other family members and didn't doesn't eat them before they are rotten. I hate this. I got angry then I did what I very much regret most - I picked up the pomegranate which she said I didn't buyrightly was rotten and threw it heavily to the floor. The big pomegranate cracked and deep purple red seeds were rolling rolled all over the floor. 


I regreted it immediately and wished I could undo what I did. My mum was astonished and then cried. She let me buy a train ticket for her to return to her hometown. I told her I felt sorry but she was still sobbing when I left for work.

I was really regreting for my regret having such a bad temper. I should control it better but I didn't don't.  I confess I am stressed recently. I easily vented it to my mum, my closed closest most beloved person. I hurt my mum. I don't know how to comfort her.

 

Please forgive  yourself.  Families are always hard.  I dont know why she told you that you dont buy the right pomegranates.  I think that must have hurt you.  Your English is very very good!!

 

 

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