A Car Journey I went on

Last year in during the National Day holiday I went to Inner Mongolia with my family: my husband, my 4-year-old daughter and my 64-year-old mother. We travelled by car because we thought it was convenient and flexible.

Speaking of this jouney, it was really spontaneous. We usually didn't don't go on trips during China's national holidays, because they are all very busy travel times  for they were all high seasons. I rember remember that morning when we were having breakfirst breakfast, and I suggested asked how about going to Inner Mongolia to see the prairies, all the family members agreed. Then my husband sat on the front of the wall with a map of China Map and planned the route, while I searched on the internet for some tourist attactions. We set out at noon.

It took us about 5 hours to cross the province line and arrive in Inner Mongolia. I was astonished by the amazing scenery. If you know I just escaped from Beijing, one of the most crowded cities in the word world, and that it was the first time in my life to see the prairies, you can imagine how I was impressed I was by the infinity and beauty of the prairies: waves of plains, seas of grass, rolling hills, wild nameless flowers and flocks of sheep and horses. Above the prairies towers the blue sky, clean and clear. There is no place to hide, no shade except for the shade of the snowy clouds. My daughter and I could not help running and rolling on the grass. Even my old (elderly) mother couldn't help jumping high. I was also very lucky to see the spectacular sunset on the prairies. The sun went down in a blaze of red while the waxing moon shined in the deep blue twilight. The horizon was wearing a golden ring.

We drove about 300km every day. We stopped every now and then to enjoy the scenery. But every time I thought I had seen the most splendid scenery, the a more marvellous view would present itself in front of us.

This particular car journey really impressed me and was important to me. That is the first time for me and my family to see the broad prairies, and every time when I am depressed I would think of the broad prairies, and then I seem to have a mind as broad as they are the prairies.

(不能说old mother, 这样有点难听。如果你想要的话，可以写elderly mother, 不过我个人觉得简单地写 ”my mother" 是最好的，因为你的妈妈只有64岁，不算是elderly!)

注意正确的拼写会更好

breakFAST, 不是 breakfirst

基本上你写得很不错！