am I an alien
Am I an Alien? Having saw that there is nobody corrects my compositions or makes some comments on that, he asked me a question that am I an alien? To tell the truth, I really felt amazed and surprised at that question! He thinks most of the compositions I wrote are very introspective works and it is a strange thing that few of the people had pay attention to it and make some comments on it.
Frankly speaking, I have never thought bout this question. And I have never thought that I am an alien. But if they said I am alien, it is also ok for me! I just take writing as my interest. I write it just for I have a mount of sense of happiness from it. For me, to write is to grow. I really can benefit from that introspective writing. When I finish reading a book or get some inspiration from my life, I will like to write down something about my own feeling and idea about that I do want to share my affection and emotion with people who may have the same value and same idea with me. Of course, I also want to get some comments about my composition from others or have some readers to correct my composition, which will provoke and improve my writing skills and English proficiency. But I want to say that write or not is my own willing and correct or not is others willing. So there is no conflict for me to write some things and keep going. If I really care that so much, good gracious! I may be live in a dismal life.
I used to think too much about others opinions and want to catch others’ attention, and for that I had suffered a lots for a long period. And with the time gone, I found that most of the problems came from my own self. When I focus on one thing too much, I may loss some more beautiful things around our life. If I always catch one point of a thing and think it is so bad, there will be a dark world in my eyes. But my heart in the depth tells me that it want to enjoy the world so I do follow it. My soul require me look up the high places of happiness and forget the terrible thing, it will be a new look in my life. If so, why not have a try? It is so easy to do it. Don’t just throw ourselves in the narrow alley with a dead wall at the end and we will find a broad plain. Stop to complain and have a deep breath, we may taste the sweet smell from the wind. I just think I find a secret garden in the progress and make my self tend to a more heath situation. If I can enjoy my life every day and keep the youth and warmth full of my heart, why not to be an alien.
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你写的太太太好了,这是我见过的最美的英语文章。
我的英语不好,但我会支持你的,就算你是alien,你也是个受欢迎的alien.
就像你说的,我们应该Stop to complain and have a deep breath, we may taste the sweet smell from the wind。难道不应该这样吗!!
God bless you.
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