Our planet, our home! Help me correct this writting please ^^
I think that caring our planet is one of the most important things we must do, and there are a lot of easy ways to do it. I started to learn this matters when a group of activist from Greenpeace gave us a talk in school when I was younger. There are a lot of people who do not mind caring the planet and they throw a lot of thrash to the nature, but they should know that they are living in The Earth too, and everybody must care their home.
I have been investigating about it, and I have read that, despite of climate change is not happening only by our fault, we are hurting our environment a lot. Perhaps the first problem is the education system, because not everybody knows how they can help, neither the importance of it.
Furthermore, lots of animal species are disappearing because of hunting, and that is destabilizing wildlife.
Moreover, lots of lands are deforested every year in Amazon to plant grain in order to feed billions of animals in meat industry, which produces more CO2 than planes, cars or the rest of industries together, while many people are dying because of hunger.
To conclude, if we want to save our planet, in one hand we have to help from home by recycling trash or reducing meat consummation an in the other hand we can help outside home in many different activities in nature.
There are more and more people taking awareness of these questions, and we will see a change soon, although perhaps we have to wait many years to notice it.
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i don't know, there are too many countries and people in this planet, and more important, now that our planet is overpopulated will be more poverty and ignorance of every kind, in my country most o f people only care about drinking beer every friday to sunday, and they do that every weekend. My people never care about animals or neither think if they should have rights as humans. There are a few people who do care about animals and they're active working on helping them but it's really hard because of our crashed economy. Most people here don't care about the planet, they just throw their garbage to the street. I don't think it would be a change soon. There is too many people in this planet who are ignorant and will have kids that also will be ignorant, And that is not going to change by how our countries work.So i really have thought about this for a few years now and i think there is no way to save humanity (and i have a lot of reasons to think that), i really hope that NASA will find us a new earth so our species can survive and create a new human race.
For now i can help earth by beeing a good human who's using this planet to live. I love earth as nothing in my life and i wish this planet would never be destroyed.
Ignorance it's a powerful tool that every government will use to make sure that every citizen will believe that they are the one and only ideology capable of make their country better, that's something that is happening in every Latin America country
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Our planet, our home! Help me correct this writting please ^^
I think that caring our planet is one of the most important things we must do, and there are a lot of easy ways to do it. I started to learn this matters when a group of activist from Greenpeace gave us a talk in school when I was younger. There are a lot of people who do not mind caring the planet and they throw a lot of thrash to the nature, but they should know that they are living in The Earth too, and everybody must care their home.
I have been investigating about it, and I have read that, despite of climate change is not happening only by our fault, we are hurting our environment a lot. Perhaps the first problem is the education system, because not everybody knows how they can help, neither the importance of it.
Furthermore, lots of animal species are disappearing because of hunting, and that is destabilizing wildlife.
Moreover, lots of lands are deforested every year in Amazon to plant grain in order to feed billions of animals in meat industry, which produces more CO2 than planes, cars or the rest of industries together, while many people are dying because of hunger.
To conclude, if we want to save our planet, in one hand we have to help from home by recycling trash or reducing meat consummation and in the other hand we can help outside home in many different activities in nature.
There are more and more people taking awareness of these questions, and we will see a change soon, although perhaps we have to wait many years to notice it.
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