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My first day learn english online Hi, my name is Freddy, I live in Lima, Peru. first i want say is sorry for my bad write, second would like talk is about of my parent, they are great people, due to they know a lot of people in their job, they work sell fruit at the market town, since 1990, but since 2011-14 they did'nt work because my father has a diseased, I have seen him through a diabetes and begining of cancer at liver, happyness he recover and now he is good, my father is togh man (he never craid and felt saded,scary) My parent are know for everything in my town they have a lot of friend, each time I walk for the street all of the people that I don't know approached me for ask: how is yor father or your mother? since I was a child I have gone with their to the market town, I have a very happy child, because I have many friends. Back of the market there was a big park to play, the park has many trees, I went up almost trees, and also I crash on the floor. I have a lot of the scars in my body, but they never stop me. today I only want to tell us, I waitin have a lot of friend. See ya.

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My first day *learning English online:
Hi, my name is Freddy, I live in Lima, Peru.
*First I want * to say *I am sorry for my bad *writing. Second *I would like *to talk about my parents. They are great people, due to *the fact that they know a lot of people in their job. They *have worked selling fruit at the market *in town since 1990, but since 2011-14 they didn't work (at all) because my father was sick/ill. I have seen him through * diabetes and the begining of liver cancer , but happily he has recovered and now he is good. My father is *a tough man , he never cried or felt sad or scared.
My *parents are *known by everyone in my town. They have a lot of friends, and every time I walk * down the street people that I don't know are *always approaching me * to ask: How is yor father or your mother?

Since I was a child I have gone with them to the market. I had a very happy childhood, because I had many friends.
At the back of the market there was a big park to play, the park had many trees. I would climb up the trees, and then crash to the ground. I got a lot of scars all over my body, but that never stopped me.

Today I only want to say I am waiting to have a lot of friends.

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My first day learning English online.

Hi, my name is Freddy. I live in Lima, Peru.
First, I want to say "sorry" for my bad writing. Second, I would like to talk about my parents. They are great people. Due to them knowing a lot of people in their job, they have sold fruit at the market since 1990, but since 2011-14 they haven't worked because my father has a disease. I have seen him through diabetes and the beginning of liver cancer. I am happy he has recovered and now he is good. My father is tough man (he never cried or felt sad, or scared.)
My parents are known for everything in my town. They have a lot of friends. Each time I walk (Toward the street / Down the street), people that I don't know approach me and ask "how is your father or your mother?"

Since I was a child, I have gone with them to the market. I am a very happy child, because I have many friends.
Behind the market, there is a big park to play on. The park has many trees. I went up the trees, and but I fall off of them. I have a lot of the scars in my body, but they never stop me.

Today I only want to tell you that "I waiting to have a lot of friends."

See ya. ("See you." is proper, but "See ya." works for informal English and casual conversations.)

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