Oh my god!! Where is someone who will proofread my note?

Last year I started this website, and at that time many friends gave me corrections on my notes.

But these days I don't get any corrections on my notes.
I don't think my English is perfect. Please, I would be very happy if I received any corrections on my notes.

OK. Let me get down to business. Today I heard one of my previous colleagues decided to go to Australia to move his company and live there [This sentence sounds awkward.  This would be more natural sounding:  "Today I heard one of my previous colleagues decided to move his business and family to Australia."].
Some Koreans think Korea is a very busy country. In Seoul, most elite office workers get off work later than 9 P.M., so they don't have much time with their families or to enjoy their hobbies.
I think my previous colleague decided to go because of that reason.

But I heard in the case of the U.S., the elite office workers also suffer from hard working conditions.
They get off work earlier than Korea's workers, but they work after having dinner with their families to achieve their commitment.

I think it might be the same case in many leading edge companies over the world.
What about Australian companies?

Is it true, or is my knowledge is wrong?

[Hope that helps!  :) ]