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I worked again today !
I work as cafe staff and I'm a kind of barista. I make a lot of coffee every day. I like coffee but I like alcohol much better. I think I should work in a bar not a cafe.
Anyway I like working in this shop. …I don't think these words are true. I want to work in another coffee shop.
Hello Yuki,
If you like alcohol it is probably better that you don't work in a bar or you may have a big headache every morning!
Just a few small mistakes but I can understand everything. It is better to make groups of sentences into paragraphs and join shorter sentences together. It is much more natural. This seems to be something that many Japanese students do when writing!
Hope this helps
Bob
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