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Finally the temperature decreases After few days very hot the rain came back and the temperature got down. During week the temperature was about 35°, yesterday it rained a lot and today the thermometers showed 22 °. Today was a good day.

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Finally the temperature decreases

After a few very hot days, very hot the rain came back and the temperature got down dropped. During the week, the temperature was about 35°. Yesterday, it rained a lot and today the thermometers showed 22 °. Today was a good day.

Sounds nice, here in Canada it's almost winter, it's been a cold week, but the temperatures should go up again next weekend.

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Finally the temperature decreases

After a few very hot days the rain came back and the temperature went down. During the week the temperature was about 35°, yesterday it rained a lot and today the thermometers showed 22°. Today was a good day.

 

"a few very hot days" or perhaps "a few days that were very hot" would work there. 

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