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10/10/2015 When the night fell, the surrounding became cold and we tucked ourselves under the thick blanket in the hotel room, drifting into sleep. In the morning, when I opened the window, the cooling wind blew into the room. A tuft of cloud hung right in front of the window, I could not touch it but it was right there. From the window, we could see the mist enveloped the surrounding; the village house was in midst of the fog sea. After a while the sun broke out, gave the land a little warm.

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10/10/2015
 

When the night fell, the surroundings became cold and we tucked ourselves under the thick blanket in the hotel room, drifting into sleep.

In the morning, when I opened the window, a cooling wind blew into the room. A tuft of cloud hung right in front of the window. I could not touch it, but it was right there. From the window, we could see the mist enveloping the surroundings; the village house was in the midst of the fog sea.

After a while, the sun broke out, and gave the land a little warmth.

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