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Alone in the dark forest. Part 3 Alan didn't know how long he was under water. When he came up to the surface he didn't notice the ghosts which follow him for last episode. Alan came to the sand coast and looked around. There was a far wasteland (was?) located in front of him. The night kept to be the darkest. Alan didn't know what he have to do. He just decided to go forward... In a few hours he arrived an unknown village. Only some country houses was located around. Alan began to explore this realm. He was surprised when he found nobody. He went into the every house, but everywhere he didn't see anyone. He went into one of houses and just waited. He stood at the window. Suddenly a rain began falling. Alan took a pack of the sigarettes and began to smoke. At little later he understood that pack was dry. -How can it be? I dived to the deep of lake... I don't know where I am, but I must to understand how can I get out here...

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Alone in the dark forest. Part 3

Alan didn't know how long he was under water. When he came up to the surface he didn't notice the ghosts which followed him from the last episode. Alan came to the sand coast and looked around. There was a far wasteland located in front of him. The night was the darkest (It had ever been). Alan didn't know what he would have to do. He just decided to go forward. 
In a few hours he arrived in an unknown village. Only some country houses were located around. Alan began to explore this realm. He was surprised when he found nobody. He went into every house, but everywhere he looked he didn't see anyone. He went into one of houses and just waited. He stood at the window. Suddenly rain began falling. Alan took a pack of the cigarettes and began to smoke. A little later he understood that the pack was dry.
-How can it be? I dove into the deep of lake... I don't know where I am, but I must understand how I can get out here...

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