Introducing myself in Chinese

大家好，我是Zane，我是十五歲（我今年十五歲）。 我從馬來西來的（我來自馬來西亞）， 可是我來澳洲我是四歲（可是我四歲時搬到澳洲）。 我在學習中文因為中文是我的文化（我正在學習中文，因為中文是我的文化），我的中文現在不好，所以我在學習（但是我正在學習）。 :D

Hello everybody, my name is Zane and I'm fifteen years old.
I was originally from Malaysia, but I moved to Australia when I was four.
I'm learning Chinese because it's part of my native culture.
My Chinese is pretty poor currently, but that's why I'm learning. :D

Introducing myself in Chinese

大家好，我是Zane，我是十五歲。 我從馬來西來的(or我来自马来西亚）， 可是我來澳洲我是四歲。 我四岁的时候来到澳洲。我在學習中文，因為中文是我的文化，我的中文現在不好，所以我在學習。 :D 

Hello everybody, my name is Zane and I'm fifteen years old.
I was originally from Malaysia, but I moved to Australia when I was four.
I'm learning Chinese because it's part of my native culture.
My Chinese is pretty poor currently, but that's why I'm learning. :D

Introducing myself in Chinese

大家好，我是Zane，我十五歲。 我從馬來西來的（我來自馬來西亞）， 可是我來澳洲我是四歲（我四歲來到澳洲）。 我在學習中文是因為中文是我的文化，我的中文現在不好，所以我在學習。 :D

Hello everybody, my name is Zane and I'm fifteen years old.
I was originally from Malaysia, but I moved to Australia when I was four.
I'm learning Chinese because it's part of my native culture.
My Chinese is pretty poor currently, but that's why I'm learning. :D

Introducing myself in Chinese

大家好，我是Zane，我是十五歲。 我從馬來西來的， 可是我來澳洲时我是四歲。 我在學習
中文因為中文是我的文化，我的中文現在不好，所以我在學習。 :D

Hello everybody, my name is Zane and I'm fifteen years old.
I was originally from Malaysia, but I moved to Australia when I was four.
I'm learning Chinese because it's part of my native culture.
My Chinese is pretty poor currently, but that's why I'm learning. :D

Well done, girl! Keep it up and you'll be fine. 

Introducing myself in Chinese

大家好，我是Zane，我十五歲了。 我来自马来西亚， 可是我在四岁的时候定居澳洲。 我在學習
中文。因為中文是我们国家起源文化，我的中文現在不好，所以我在學習。 :D

Hello everybody, my name is Zane and I'm fifteen years old.
I was originally from Malaysia, but I moved to Australia when I was four.
I'm learning Chinese because it's part of my native culture.
My Chinese is pretty poor currently, but that's why I'm learning. :D