An ILETS oral practice

I would like to talk about a friend of mine. But I'm not talking about a Chinese friend,. I'm talking about a Japanese boy. The first time I met him is was in a chef training. You know, I'm really a foodie,. I loves all kinds of gourmet cuisine, especially Chinese food and desserts. But, To tell you the truth, I can't couldn't cooking by me self myself so, I thought that I needed to training my to be able to cooks,. I wanted to be a gastronome chef so, I participated in cooking training and I met him. He is was very industrious, and has been he studyied harde in cooking. He worked hard for his goal. Nothing coul'd stop him from pursuing his career development. He waited for his turn, and finally it led to success. Nothing coul'd stop him from pursuing his career development. So He is now working at a very famous Japanese restaurant. It's an international restaurant chains with the chefs was shipped coming all the way from Japan. He is an energetic person willing to be a good employee. He wored hard for his goal, waited for his turn, and finally led to success. Also, he is the happiest person I know, and everyone agrees that he has a great personality.

This informal essay is in preparation for my IELTS oral test. Please help me to correct it. Also, help me to correct it with authentic phrases. And help me to add some native and appropriate conjunctive phrases or conjunctions between each sentence(I only just used 'and'. Please give me some others). Thank you very much!