INTRODUCE MYSELF

My name is Shan, and I am 20 years old. I am a happy girl, and I have a happy family. My family have has 5 people, my father, my mother, two older sister and me. I love my family.
I was born in October. I think it’s a the nicest month in the year, because it’s not too hot and not too cold. I like jogging, swimming, and yoga. Sometimes I jog with my friend at our college collage after dinner. I always read some novels after my class. The romantic novels are my favorites.
I have learned studied English for 10 years. Sometimes my expressions are is not correct. I want to be a teacher in the my future, and from long-term point-of-view in sight of, [I can choose to read grind.] （对这部分我不明白你的意思。） My major is hydromechanics. My teacher is very kind, that’s why I choose to learn it. Although it’s hard for me, I will try my best to study well.

INTRODUCE MYSELF

My name is Shan, and I am 20 years old. I am a happy girl, and I have a happy family. My family have 5 people, father, mother, two older sister and me. I love my family.
I was born in October. I think it’s a nicest month in the year, because it’s not too hot and not too cold. I like jogging, swimming and yoga. Sometimes I jog with my friend at our collage after dinner. I always read some novels after my class. The romantic novels are my favorites.
I have learned English 10 years. Sometimes my expression is not correct. I want to be a teacher in my future, and from long-term in sight of, I can choose to read grind. My major is hydromechanics. My teacher is very kind, that’s why I choose to learn it. Although it’s hard for me, I will try my best to study well.

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INTRODUCE MYSELF

My name is Shan, and I am 20 years old. I am a happy girl, and I have a happy family. My family have* 5 people, my father, and mother, two older sisters and myself/me. I love my family.

I was born in October. I think it’s a the nicest month of/in the year, because it’s not too hot, and not too cold. I like jogging, swimming and yoga. Sometimes I jog with my friend at our college after dinner. I always read (some novels) after (my) classes; The romantic novels are my favorites.
I have been learninged English for 10 years. Sometimes my expression is not correct*.

I want/hope/would like to be a teacher in the my future, and from long-term in sight of*, I can choose to read grind**?. My major is hydromechanics. My teacher is very kind, that’s/which is why I choose to learn it and, although it’s hard for me, I will try my best to do/study well.

*There are five (people) in my family : . .

* . . I do not express myself correctly / I do not write correctly

*in the long term / from a long term point of view

**study again/further ??