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To study with teachers or without them? It is not my opinion, It is only essay for TOEFL The modern system of education implies that teacher is a necessary part of a process. However, in my humble opinion, a lot of people are able to study without teachers. I guess, I am one of them. Now I will try to explain my position about this complicated question. First of all, not all teachers have enough professional skills for teaching people. There are significant amount of courses, extension courses, trainings with special certificates, etc. nowadays in the modern world that man can get and teach people after obtaining this certificates. Thus, quality of education is decreasing now. Everybody wants to earn money and sells nothing. Secondly, student can have his or her own opinion about certain object, and this opinion can differ from teacher’s one. At the same time, teachers usually reluctantly get different opinion about something. However, a student and a teacher have to have the same opinion about main points for efficient study. Finally, I would like to say about my own preferences in this question. It relates with my personality, my temperament. For example, I get more information if I work on my own comfort pace. On the other hand, if teacher does not provide me these comfortable conditions, my productivity is decreasing. In conclusion, based on the argument explored above, I would like to say that my own choice is studying without teachers. In that case I keep my opinion about main parts of studying, in addition, I can follow my own comfort pace and obtain more information than with teacher.

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To study with teachers or without them? It is not my opinion, It is only essay for TOEFL

Modern education requires that a teacher is a necessary part of the process. However, in my humble opinion, a lot of people are able to study without teachers. I guess I am one of them. Now I will try to explain my position over this.
First of all, not all teachers have enough professional skills for teaching people. There are many courses, extension courses, training with special certificates, etc. nowadays in the modern world that one can get and teach people after getting them. Thus the quality of education decreases. Everybody wants to earn money and sell nothing.
Secondly, a student can have their own opinion about something differing from the teacher’s. At the same time, teachers are usually reluctant to get different opinions. However, a student and a teacher have to have the same opinion about the main points for efficient study.
Finally, I would like to say about my own preferences here which relate to my personality and temperament. For example, I get more information if I work at my own comfortable pace. On the other hand, if the teacher does not provide me these comforts my productivity decreases.
In conclusion, based on the argument above, I would like to say that my own choice is to study without teachers. Thus I can keep my opinion about the main parts of studying. Additionally I can go at my own pace and get more information than with a teacher.

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