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Late at night diaries. Night 1
Here I am right now. I led on my bed and I can't sleep again. There are a lot things coming up in my head, and they're leaving a mess in mind. I I'm kind nervous because next month, I'm going to do the most important exam of my life by far.
After this phase, I'm thinking about learning Japanese and Chinese. I love oriental culture. If I had been born there, I would be so happy haha.
I better get some sleep. Gotta work tomorrow
Late Night Diary- Night1
Here I am. I lay in my bed, but I can't sleep, again. There are a lot of things coming up to/ on my mind, they left a mess there. I am kind of, nervous because next month I am going to have/take the most important exam in life.
After this phase, I started thinking about learning Japanese and Chinese. I love oriental culture. If I were born in the east i would be very happy, haha:) I'd better get some sleep. Gotta work tomorrow!
I think this is a well flowed writing.Your thoughts were a bit messy but smoothly run. I think it's OK that we write our diaries in oral style.(the underlined part with/ meaning: im not sure about it either:P)
Late at night diaries. Night 1
Here I am right now. I ledam lying on my bed and I can't can't sleep again. There are a lot of things coming up in my head, and they're are leaving me a mess in mind. I I'am kind of nervous, because next month, I'm am going to dotake the most important exam of my life by far.
After this phase, I'mI am thinking about learning Japanese and Chinese. I love oriental culture. If I had beenwere born there, I would be sovery happy haha.
I'd better get some sleep. Gotta work tomorrow
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