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An email of apology Hello Ahmad, I owe you an apology for not coming to your birthday party last week. That afternoon, I was on my sister's house and had to look after my little nephew because his mother needed to go to a wedding party. I have no experience to take care of baby. After his mother leaving the house, the baby start crying and made me anxious. I've tried to make him calm down but I couldn't. I was feeling so exhausted. Thirty minutes later, his father arrived home and the baby become quiet rapidly. So, I was excited to leave home then I was in a hurry came into my room to change my clothes. Accidentally, I saw a book on the bed and it was Harry Potter one. You know, I'm dying when I see Harry Potter's book. I love it very much. I decided to see the book and thought to read it for a little while. Unfortunately, the book had made me sleepy and then I felt asleep for about five hours. I woke up at 8 o'clock in the evening after dreaming a great birthday party we have done. I'm so guilty that I broke my promise to come to your party. Will you have a free time tomorrow? There's something special has been prepared for you. I hope you'll like it. I sincerely apologize that I didn't come to your party. With regards, Your best friend, Peter

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An email of apology

Hello Ahmad,

I owe you an apology for not coming to your birthday party last week. That afternoon, I was on at my sister's house and had to look after my little nephew because his mother needed to go to a wedding party. I have no experience to takinge care of babiesy. After his mother leftaving the house, the baby started crying and made me anxious. I've tried to make him calm down but I couldn't. I was feeling so exhausted. Thirty minutes later, his father arrived home and the baby become quiet rapidly. So, I was excited to leave home, and then, I was in a hurry, I came into my room to change my clothes. Accidentally, I saw a book on the bed and it was Harry Potter one. You know, I'm dieying when I see a Harry Potter's book. I love it very much. I decided to pick up see the book and thought to read it for a little while. Unfortunately, the book had made me sleepy and then I fellt asleep for about five hours. I woke up at 8 o'clock in the evening after dreaming of the a great birthday party we hadve done.

I'm so sorry guilty that I broke my promise to come to your party. Will you have a free time tomorrow? There's something special that has been prepared for you. I hope you'll like it. I sincerely apologize that I didn't come to your party.

With regards,
Your best friend,

Peter

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