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Write about what happened today last weekend was Korea thanksgiving day. so my family and i went to grand mother's house. i haven't seen my grandparent for 1 year. Since i had a gradudation assignment , i was pretty busy last holiday. Actually i have to work that weekend but i change my schedule of my work. luckily my maneger approve to change my schedule ( Honestly , im a little worry about changning schedule , cuz at weekend i work there with only one coworker. But he found substitued worker, so i could rest that weekend. yay ) Like other holiday , There are so many fatty food. when Korean hoilday come, people cook food which is using egg. ( we normally dip the ingredients in the eggs and then fired it on olied pen. they are really high calories. but i bet it is really delidious ) and this Autumn has a wonderful sun shine. So most fruites are really great condition. espeacially , pear ! i really like pear. beacuse in holiday, we hava a memorial ceremony for ancester. so most ingredients need to be best condition . we bow to our ancester, hope they like the food . and say hello to them . its really cozy holiday indeed. and the most beautiful memory of this holiday is the midnight when we go out to walk around the village. there are really awesome full moon. ( it was shining that day ) and cool weather . Even some other vilage people play the fire work. i think this holiday memory make me happy always

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Write about what happened today

last weekend was Korea thanksgiving day.
So my family and I went to my grandmother's house. I haven't seen my grandparents for a year.
Since I had a graduation assignment , I was pretty busy last holiday.
Actually, I have to work that weekend, but i changed my schedule at work. Luckily, my manager approved the change to my schedule.  Honestly , I'm a little worried about changning the schedule , beacuse the weekend i worked there was only one coworker. He found substitute worker, so I could rest that weekend - yay ! 
Like any other holiday , there are so many fatty foods. When the Korean holiday comes, people cook food is using an egg. ( we normally dip the ingredients in the eggs and then fired it on oiled pan. They are really high calories. but it's really delicous )
 This Autumn, we had wonderful sunshine, so most fruites are in really great condition, especially , pears !
I really like pears, beacuse in holiday, we hava a memorial ceremony for our ancesters. so most ingredients need to be in the best condition . We bow to our ancester, hope they like the food, and say hello to them. it's  a really cozy holiday indeed.
The most beautiful memory of this holiday is at midnight when we go out to walk around the village.
There was a really awesome full moon that was bright and you could feel the crisp cool autumn air. Even some of the other village people played the fire work.
I think this holiday memory will always make me happy. 

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Write about what happened today

Last weekend it was Korean Thanksgiving Day.
So my family and i went to grandmother's house. I haven't seen my grandparent for 1 year.
Since I had a graduation assignment , I was pretty busy last holiday.
Actually I had to work in that weekend but I changed the schedule of my work. Luckily my manager approved to change my schedule ( Honestly, I'm a little worried about changing my schedule, because at the weekend I work there with only one coworker. But he found a substitute worker, so I could rest that weekend. yay )
Like other holidays, there are so many fatty foods. When Korean holidays come, people cook food which uses eggs. (We normally dip the ingredients in the eggs and then fry it on oiled pan. They really contain high calories. But I bet that it is really delicious.)
This Autumn has wonderful sunshine. So most fruits are in really great condition especially pears!
I really like pears because in the holiday, we have a memorial ceremony for ancestors. So most ingredients need to be in the best condition. We bow to our ancestors, hope they like the food and say hello to them . It's a really cozy holiday indeed.
And the most beautiful memory of this holiday is in the midnight when we go out to walk around the village.
There is a really awesome full moon. It was shinting that day and the weather was cool. Even some other villagers play fireworks.
I think that this holiday memory makes me happy always.

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