A pen pal letter

This is my homework-writing a letter to a new pen pal.

Dear Miss/Mr X,

I am so glad to be writing this letter to you. First, let me introduce myself. My name is Tong. I am 25-year-old and I was born in 29th October,1990. I am come from a medium-sized city in the south of China, but now I am studying in Beijing as an ecology student.

Second, for you can know me better, I would like to tell you something more about myself. In some people's eyes, I am an 'otaku', which means the young people who love to stay at home rather than go outside. Because I love to watch football games and play TV games, they make me look like an otaku. But in other people's eyes, I am a traveler. I had been to 10 different places in the past year. If you are interested to know my travel experience I could tell you more in the next letter.

There are a lot of things I wish to tell you, I hope I didn't make you feel bored. If you find this letter interesting, please tell me and write me back, and tell me something about yourself. I hope we can be friends in the future.

Your new friend, Tong

[Good job.  If you find that another person keeps your attention, then that person is interesting to you.  You are interested by them.]

A pen pal letter

This is my homework,which  is to write a letter to a new pen pal :

Dear Miss/Mr X,

I am so glad to write this letter to you.

First, let me introduce myself./Firstly, let me give you an introduction of my self ( firstly is more formal)

My name is Tong, 25-years old, and was borned on the 29th October,1990.

I am come from a( I live in) medium-sized city in the south of China, but now I am studying in Beijing as an ecology student. / but I am now studying Ecology in Beijing

Second, for you can to know me better, I would like to tell you something more about myself.

In some peoples' point of view, I am an otaku, which means a young person who prefers to stay at home rather than to go out(side).

Because I love to watch football games and play TV games, it makes me seems like I am an otaku. But in other people's eyes, I am a traveler. I had been to 10 different places in the past year. If you have an interest to know about my travel experiences, I can tell you about them in the next letter.

In the eyes of some people ,I am.../ In the eyes of others .I am
 
There are a lot of things I wish to tell you,and I hope I did not bore you. If you have an interest with this letter, please tell me and write me back, and I will tell me something more about you. I hope we can be friends in the future.

Your new friend, Tong