Can you correct this for me ?

Hi everyone ! Can you correct this for me please ? I would be very very grateful ! ;)


This document, is an article, entitled "Bangladesh Garment factories still exploiting child labour for UK products" written by Miles Brignall and Sarah Butler. It was taken from a British magazine The Guardian, published on February 6th 2014. The text focuses on the deplorable working conditions and the lack of safety in the factories of Bangladesh. To write the article, the Guardian has relied on the ITV undercover documentary, which has filmed inside the factories to show the working conditions of the employees. How should we face the perpetual exploitative child labour in Bangladesh factories?

I am not sure if this is what you mean to say with the last question, but the "to" seems awkward there.