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The Shawshank redemption I`d like to tell you about last movie I saw in English. "The Shawshank redemption". If you didn`t see it I strongly recommend you to do it when you`ll have such chance. It`s about one banker who was unfairly convicted for the murder of his wife and her lover. He found himself at the Shawshank prison but tried to do his best in this situation. He expanded prison library`s funds, taught young illiterate guy and helped him to pass exam... On the other side he collaborated with prison warden helping him to launder money. As you can guess from the title of the movie the prisoner tried to escape and succeed in it! Lucky! He realized his dream to travel to the coast of the Pacific ocean, moreover having much money in his pockets!

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When you would say "с другой стороны" in Russian, say "on the other hand" in English.  Do NOT use the word "side".

 

С одной стороны......с другой стороны

On the one hand......on the other hand

 

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The Shawshank rRedemption

I`d like to tell you about last movie I saw in English., "The Shawshank Redemption". If you didn`t seehaven't seen, it I strongly recommend that you to do it whenever you`ll have such the chance. It`s about one a banker who was unfairly convicted for the murder of his wife and her lover. He found himself at in the Shawshank prison but tried to do his best in this situation. He [expanded] increased the prison's library`s funds (fund = money, collection = number of books), taught a young illiterate [guy] man and helped him to pass an exam... On the other side, he collaborated with the prison warden by helping him to launder money. As you can guess from the title of the movie, the prisoner tried to escape and succeed in it! Lucky! He realized fulfilled his dream to of traveling to the coast of the Pacific Ocean, and moreover having much plenty of money in his pockets!

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