Autumn's weather in my country
There are cold in the morning and evening. Temperature is about twenty degrees. However it is warm on the lunch. In the middle of the day there are about thirty degrees. Sun is shining and light wind is blowing. Most important problem in autumn for many peoples in my country are what clothes are wearing. Long sleeves and jacket are applicable in the morning, but it is warm in the day. People need to carry jacket all day because of two morning hours.
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Autumn's weather in my country
It is cold in the morning and evening. The temperature is about twenty degrees. However it is warm at the lunch. In the middle of the day it is about thirty degrees. The sun is shining and a light wind is blowing. The most important problem in autumn for many people in my country are what clothes are worn. Long sleeves and jackets are applicable in the morning, but it is warm in the day. People need to carry a jacket all day because of the two morning hours.
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