Festival in Ukraine. Ivan Kupala Day

My name is Gordey. I live in Ukraine. In Ukraine there are many festivals, for examples Ivan Kupala Day/ I have never taken a part in this festival, but I can tell your about it because our teacher told us about this festival on the last week. This festival is celebrated in midsummer. It's an ancient festival. It has many rituals. One of them is "Kupalo", which means "bathing". The ancient god Kupalo was the god of love and harvest. Water and fire symbolize the sun and rain which are needed for crops to grow. People gather flowers and plants to decorate their houses. Girls make garlands and throw them in the water. If the garlands don't sink it is a good sign. People go to the area of the village and make a bonfire near the  pond or river. Young people jump over the bonfire. The bonfire must burn all night. Now it isn't a big festival in cities but in villages and in the country people celebrate this day. I wish to take part in this festival in the next summer with my friends.

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