My thirtieth birthday

My birthday has been was six months ago. It wasn't a normally birthday. It was my thirtieth birthday and I think it's that is a special date, and I wanted to celebrate with a special party.

I found a small garage to prepare it and I rented it. I prepared all everything: food, drinks, music, lights, and a photocall (I am not sure what this is - possibly a photobooth?), with a red carpet and some photos to of my friends. It was funny!

It was a costumer party. I weared wore a Mexican custom. My friends dressed up too. We arrived and they were surprised whith by what a big party I had been prepared.

We danced, laughed and enjoyed ourselves until from nine at night, until six in the last the next morning. We finished more tired, because We were a lot of time here!(We were all very tired, because we had been there a long time!)

Sounds like that was a really great party! And your description of the party was very good.

Hope my corrections and suggestions were helpful.

My thirty birthday

My birthday was six months ago. It wasn't a normally birthday. It was my thirty birthday and I think it's a special date, and I wanted to celebrate with a special party.

I found a small garage to prepare and rented it. I prepared all: food, drinks, music, lights, and a photocall, with a red carpet and some photos to my friends. It was funny!

It was a costumer party. I weared a Mexican custom. My friends dessed up too. We arrived and were surprised with a big party I had been prepared.

We danced, laughed and enjoyed till morning. We finished more tired, because We were a lot of time here!