English homework

Are all criminals treated the same?

Obviously, all criminals are treated differently, because they are different. Murder and robbery are very different. Murder is worse than robbery, so the punishment is worse.
Although our justice is not the same for all of us, the constitution say that everyone is equal, so we have equal rights. There are laws and rules in society that everyone must obey, unfortunately it does not happen. We live in a democratic country and we are free to make our own choices; however, there are consequences for all choices, and justice must be applied when someone does something against the law. Everyone can make wrong choices, it is not about to be poor or rich, it is about moral principles. Brazil has many challenges, the most important is the legal system of Brazil. It is a failure and needs to be revised. Brazil is a big country where there are good people, it need to walk forward and not backwards.

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