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sorrow bird I have a little poem gusto and i want you view it and evaluate me: Oh!my heart nest fosters grief chicks! Why when you want achieve truth every guidance lights will be off?! These chicks are growing in my heart! Happy rope tries to scoop me from this hole! Your heart can be your hell Those chicks be giant vultures that annoyed me every moment and vanished my heart walls! I disappointed from every thing...But A day truth light saw me cared me and said: painful griefs had great joys!wait and im waiting but sorrow bird...

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Tnx
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I like it. Especially the metaphors, especially this one: "Happy rope tries to scoop me from this hole".Write more poems!
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very emotional) well done!

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