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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi my friends, my intension for learn english. It's for improve my profession. I work as Frontend Developer and I want to have a change to live in other countrie. My desire and Dream are Canada, Portugal and England. So see you soon, I hope that you help me, improve my skills with English as a second language.

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Hi, my friends, my intention for learning English is for improving my profession. I work as Front End Developer and I want to live in other countries. My desired countries are Canada, Portugal and England. So, see you soon. I hope that you will help me and improve my skills with English as a second language.

(I'm sorry if this isn't completely accurate because in some places I wasn't sure what you meant, but hope this helps anyway :)

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi my friends, my intention for learn English. It's for improve my profession. I work as a front-end developer and I want to have a change to live in other country. My desire and Dream are Canada, Portugal and England.

So see you soon, I hope that you help me, improve my skills with English as a second language.

( Instead of writing, "my intention for learn English. It's for improve my profession" a better way to write it is, "My intention to learn English is to improve at my profession." )

 ( When you write, "My desire and Dream are Canada, Portugal and England.", it sounds like you want to live in all of these places at the same time. A better way to say this could be, "It is my dream to live in Canada, Portugal, or England." )

(So far you are doing okay! I can understand what you say, but your writing needs some work. All you need to do is practice, practice, practice!)

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Anyone can correct me if have any sentence wrong.

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