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Impressionability. What is it? From time to time something banal leaves a mark in your memory. Like you see through the bus window a little red flower and then you have a nightmare about big red extraterrestrials invasion. It is called impressionability. Rather a kind of impressionability.It means that your brain remembers emotions which related with some things or situations, and then repeats them in your dreams. One of these days I've discovered that I am extremely impressionable. Whatever they say it's a feature of children, I am sure that they mistaken. But maybe I am an adult child. Well then, it was a bright autumn day. I was walking with my dog through the town and I saw a plane which was too close to the ground. There was a thought in my head: "Why is it so close?". Next was: "They are flying so close to the ground just when they falling". It seemed to me really enormous, like it only just hopped off the roof next to me. Happily it had not crashed and I got back to my walking. By the evening, I forgot about that. But this night I had a strange dream: I was looking at my backyard through the window and saw that an enormous plane was falling to the ground. Sounds familiar, yes? In my dream, I was on 7th or 8th floor, so I had to observe. After that, I appeared on the aircraft carrier. That was really strange because I've seen them just in the movies. There happened the same, but the plane was landing next to me. And pilot had lost control. So, how can it be called, if it's not an impressionability?

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Impressionability. What Is It?

From time to time something banal/trivial leaves a mark in your memory. Like you seeing through the bus window a little red flower and then you having a nightmare about big red extraterrestrials invasion invading. 

It is called impressionability. Rather, a kind of impressionability. It means that your brain remembers emotions which are related with some certain things or situations, and then repeats them in your dreams.
One of these days I've discovered that I am extremely impressionable. Whatever Whenever they say it's a feature of children, I am sure that they are mistaken. But maybe I am an adult child/child at heart.
Well then, it was a bright autumn day. I was walking with my dog through the town and I saw a plane which was too close to the ground. There was A thought raced in through my head: "Why is it so close?". Next was came: "They are flying so close to the ground just only when they're falling". It seemed to me really enormous, like it only just hopped took off from the roof next to me. Happily Luckily it had did not crashed and I got back to my walking.
By the evening, I forgot about that/it. But this that night I had a strange dream:
I was looking at my backyard through the window and saw that an enormous plane was falling to the ground. Sounds familiar, yes? In my dream, I was on the 7th or 8th floor, so I had to observe watch. After that, I appeared to be on the aircraft carrier. That was really strange because I've seen them just in the movies. There happened the same thing happened, but the plane was landing next to me. And the pilot had lost control.
So, how what can it be called, if it's not an impressionability?

 

Very interesting, thank you for sharing. :) I should point out though, that despite what looks like a lot of corrections, there was little grammatically wrong here. Most of the problems were just stylistic changes I made to make it more natural-sounding. Your English is not bad by any means, and I understood everything you wrote, and enjoyed it, too. Keep writing, please! :)

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