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First words

Hi, everyone! Today is my first time I am writing here. I am in my room, lying down, with the lights off and a little anxious because I'm afraid of making big grammatical mistakes of. I know that it takes errors to learn it, but as it is the my first time here and I am a beginner learner I think everyone gets have a little bit of fear. I think that is normal. Isn't it? I hope someone can help me to improve my writing.

Good job overall. 

Jaime

First words

Hi, everyone! Today is my first time I am writing here. I am in my room, lying down, with the lights off, and a little anxious because I'm afraid of making big mistakes of grammar. I know that it takes err to learn it, but as is the first time here and I am a beginner I think everyone gets a little bit of fear. I think it is normal too. isn't it? I hope someone can help me to improve my writing.

This is very good my friend!!