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PRACTICING MY NEW WORDS... 1- Dogs are famous to be the loyalest animals when it comes about relationship with humans. But animal instinct is stronger than any possible relasionships. So never trust to leave unattended your meal's leftover on the cofee table.. you might not see them again. I love my dog, is the funniest friend I could ever have, but I'm ready to bet he would bury me in order to put his paw on my prosciutto sandwich! 2-Suddenly a thought washed over me, I was in a veritable prison and nobody could have set me free. The worst was realising that I had put myself in that prison itself and threw away the key. I've been deceiving me for so long that I was free, but this was just an illusion. Nobody warned me during my crazy run towards darkness, and now here I am with no torch to light up my road and I'm blind, powerless, and voiceless. What am I gonna do next? 3- Next week at this time I will be lying on the beach drinking a margarita cocktail in Formentera. But for now I'm still in my office working as usual. 4- My grand grandmother was a very sweet woman. She was always concerned I got fed enough so she prepared me every kind of delicacy. My favourite dish was pennette pasta with tomato concentrate sauce, I now it sounds pretty disgusting but it was delicious! I've never menaged to prepare it as she did. She used to wear a light blue shawl with a safety pin to put it closed. I still have that shawl in my closet.

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PRACTISING MY NEW WORDS...

1- Dogs are famous to be for being the loyalest most loyal (1) animals when it comes about to relationships with humans. But animal instinct is stronger than any possible relationships. So never trust to leave unattended your meal's the leftovers from your meal unattended (2) on the coffee table.. you might not see them again. I love my dog, he is the funniest friend I could ever have, but I'm ready to bet he would bury me in order to put his paw on my prosciutto sandwich!
(1) In English "loyalist" is a noun and only refers to a person. Someone who is loyal to an established ruler or government.

(2) I've changed the word order of the sentence so it reads better in English.


2-Suddenly a thought washed over me, I was in a veritable prison and nobody could have set me free. The worst was realising that I had put myself in that prison itself and threw thrown away the key. I've been deceiving me myself for so long that I was free, but this was just an illusion. Nobody warned me during my crazy run towards darkness, and now here I am, with no torch to light up my road way and I'm blind, powerless, and voiceless. What am I gonna do next?

3- Next week at this time This time next week (1) I will be lying on the beach drinking a margarita cocktail in Formentera. But for now I'm still in my office working as usual.

(1) Change of word order.

4- My grand great grandmother was a very sweet woman. She was always concerned that I got fed enough so she prepared me every kind of delicacy for me. My favourite dish was pennette pasta with tomato concentrate sauce, I now it sounds pretty disgusting but it was delicious! I've never managed to prepare it as she did. She used to wear a light blue shawl with a safety pin to put keep it closed/wrapped around her. I still have that shawl in my closet.

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