My Covering Letter

First of all, I would want to know if my first design of a covering letter is good and I would want to get a feedback from an expert here.

""""
Dear Sir,
I am writing to enquire if you have any vacancies in your company. I enclosed my CV for your information.

With a degree in Business Administration at the Universidad de Granada and past experience both in the corporate world, I am confident that career goals can be a plus***. Additionally, I have obtained a Masters of International Business degree at ESIC (EIG).

Also, I am a very analytical, ambitious, and highly cooperative. I want to highlight my international profile for being founded on the basis of communication and cross‐cultural understanding, as well as on the essential skills to work in a global and diverse environment with culturally heterogeneous teams.

Furthermore, I consider myself as a hard-working candidate; I am passionate about sports, business, and finance. If you would like to know more about myself, please visit my blog germanintheworld.blogspot.com

Yours sincerely,"""


So, what is your opinion?

Thank you

Yo creo que es muy bien, pero hay una frase marcada con *** que no entiendo mucho. Posiblemente con el contexto que tiene el jefe tiene sentido, pero la no comprendo un cien por ciento. Pero su ingles es muy bueno y puede hablar y escribir muy bien en ese idioma. Corregi solamente unas cosas que hacen que fluya mejor, asi buen trabajo con su carta!