Do you want to know about Xi'an?

Today's article is about my hometown Xi'an.
Xi'an is located in the north west of China. It has many famous landmarks[1] like the Great Wild Goose Pagoda, the Terracotta Army and so on.
If you love traditional Chinese food, Xi'an also is the best choice. As we all know, China has a lot of minorities. In Xi'an ,The Hui nationality is very populous[2] here. And you can find many delicious foods in Hui minority streets. 

Today, China is becoming more modernized. And there were 13 emperors built their dynasty in Xi'an. That's makes Xi'an's culture more complex and charming.
If you have a plan to come to China, do not miss Xi'an! It's a really great. You won't regret visiting here.

Remember you also need spaces after a comma.

Popular is the wrong word. You can't choose your nationality! Although populous is not such a great word. Perhaps just 'common'.

Green is more natural. Red is errors.

view spots are places to look at a view from.

It is a nice place! But it was very polluted when I visited.