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Hello everyone, my friend and I are going to talk about a trip we made to Lourdes.

- We two and others friends (Better: My friends and I..) went to Lourdes to celebrate the feasts there.
* We went on motorcycles, the trip was about 2 hours.
- When we arrived, we stayed in the house of my uncle.(Better: we stayed in my uncle's house)
- I settled into my cousin's room
* And the rest stayed in a large room behind the house.
- We went to see the main concert of the fair
* When we arrived, the men went to buy beer
- We started to sing, dance and drink
* after half an hour, the beers were finished so again we went to buy more.
- Really, We drank alot, take much, then someone said, Why not bring aguardiente? and so, the men went to bring it
* All drunks we went of concert to house. (We were all drunk when we went from the concert to the house)
-When we returned to home, I remember, we walked carefully so as not to wake my uncle.
- But all were dead of laughter (But we were all dying of laughter)
* Anyway his (my?) uncle woke up and scolded us all
- Sent us to sleep.
* All of us we woke up the next day with a hangover,
- the first hangover in my life; My uncle was angry so he sent us to church.
* Us all of us with headaches and hearing the Mass.
- After the Mass, we went to the house and waited for the lunch
-Neighbors began arriving neighbors with food too
* We started to help to roast the meat and serve food.
* After a while, we were all dancing and drinking
- The funny thing is that my uncle got drunk.
* His (My?) uncle is a case when he's drunk.