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Question-Many students decide to further their study abroad what are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Recently, a number of students are going to other countries for studying their major and experiment. However, there is a dispute whether pupils should go to overseas or not. there are benefits as well as disadvantages. first, the benefit is experience and broaden student knowledge. On the other hand, the disadvantage is homesick and difference culture.
First of all, international students can obtain a lot of benefits in other countries through studying their major. This is because, student major in their country is better than other countries, it is clear that there have more information and atmosphere. For example, when I was in university, my major is culinary so I went to French, there were a lot of information about cuisine and history, I had not enough time, but I learned considerable. Although it is short time, it accounted significantly in my life. Likewise, the abroad studying is affected to students in their major.
On the other hand, the oversea damage to students in their mind. This is because, there are a lot of different culture in the world. the student should adapt there culture. In addition, food is also different. According to Korean newspapers research, the considerable international students came back to their country. This is because, they could not adapt there culture and food. The homesick came in second place on research. For the this reasons, It is clear that the oversea studying has plenty of difficult problems.
To sum up, the oversea studying exist in benefits and drawbacks. I agree that if the student major in their country is better than other country, the student can study in other country. Mentioned above, this essay will justify my opinion.
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