My old brother

I'm going to talk about my old brother. I have three brothers and one of them is called Roger. Physically Roger is tall and little fat. His hair color is dark, his hair type is straight. He has tanned skin tone, his eyes are brown, his noise (nose) is a little big, his lips are thin. He has much moustache on his face, personally I don't like his moustache because I think the men look much better when they don't have moustache. Likewise his body is little fat because he likes to eat much a lot of food, almost everyday  he goes where my sister in law is , she is kind and she likes to cook. As a result she gives my brother some food. In addition, my brother Roger is gentleman, quiet, friendly, and amusing. Regardless he has some defects for example he is a little careless and lazy. I think his major virtue is his generosity because he always helps to almost all poor people. For example he gives away some money for so these people can improve their life conditions! Therefore I believe he is a good a sweet person. I love him so much! (Atte?) Jimena Coaquira

Good job with a few little mistakes.