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feelings for the recent days It's been four days since I joined in italki ,a useful online social website.It's amazing that I can make friends with people from different countries all over the world.It' interesting to talk with them about their daily life and so that to know more about the culture and lifestyles in other countries.Before I go to sleep I wonder what will happen to my new friends cause it's almost the begining of their new day.And now I'm typing with my brunch and a new song recommended by a friend I made here.I like it and deeply felt the saying "Music knows no boundary between countries"is right. In the following afternoon I'm going to study English and educational psychology.BTW,I'd like to speak to you guys in English by other social apps but It's not convenient for me to use Twitter and Facebook cause they're forbidden in China...I recommed WeChat and Weibo,those two are quite commonly used in my country for instant chatting and sharing fresh news. Hope you help correct my mistakes in my essay and wish you guys enjoy your day ^^

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feelings for the recent days

It's been four days since I joined in italki,a useful online social website. It's amazing that I can make friends with people from different countries all over the world. It's interesting to talk with them about their daily life and so that to learn more about the cultures and lifestyles in other countries. Before I go to sleep, I wonder what will happen to my new friends cause it's almost the begining of their new day. And now I'm typing with my brunch and listening to a new song recommended by a friend I made here.I like it and deeply felt the saying "Music knows no boundary between countries"is right. In the following afternoon I'm going to study English and educational psychology.BTW,I'd like to speak to you guys in English by other social apps but It's not convenient for me to use Twitter and Facebook cause they're forbidden in China...I recommed WeChat and Weibo,those two are quite commonly used in my country for instant chatting and sharing fresh news.
Hope you help correct my mistakes in my essay and wish you guys enjoy your day ^^

 

Very well done! Few mistakes and very good grammar and punctuation. 

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feelings from recent days

It's been four days since I joined in italki, a useful online social website.  It's amazing that I can make friends with people from different countries all over the world.  It's interesting to talk with them about their daily life and to know more about the culture and lifestyles in other countries.  Before I go to sleep I wonder what will happen to my new friends, because it's almost the beginning of their new day.  And now I'm typing during brunch listening to a new song recommended by a friend I made here.  I like it and deeply felt the saying "Music knows no boundary between countries" is right. This afternoon I'm going to study English and educational psychology.  By the way, I'd like to speak to you guys in English by other social apps, but it's not convenient for me to use Twitter and Facebook because they're forbidden in China...  I recommed WeChat and Weibo; those two are quite commonly used in my country for instant chatting and sharing fresh news.
I hope you help correct my mistakes in my essay and hope you guys enjoy your day!

[well done!]

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