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comparision of two maps cambridge english IELTS9 test1 writing task1 as the two maps show, before the construction of tourist facilities, there were only natuaral resources on the island, such as the beach, the sea and several trees. after construction, a lot of accomodations showed up, forming two major living areas, which distributed in two circles. there are many footpaths connecting those houses so that it is more convenient for residents to walk around. in the southwest in of island, a reception center is connected to a restaurant by a vehicle track. to the north, the track leads to a pier on the sea. moving to the west, a swimming area is built beside the beach, adding another function to the island. in a word, the construction of tourist facilities improves the functions of the island in an effective way.

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comparision of two maps

cambridge english IELTS9 test1 writing task1
as the two maps show, before the construction of tourist facilities, there were only natuaral resources on the island, such as the beach, the sea and several trees.


after construction, a lot of accomodations showed up, forming two major living areas, which distributed in two circles. there are many footpaths connecting those houses so that it is more convenient for residents to walk around. in the southwest in of island, a reception center is connected to a restaurant by a vehicle track. to the north, the track leads to a pier on the sea.


moving to the west, a swimming area is built beside the beach, adding another function to the island.

in a word, the construction of tourist facilities improves the functions of the island in an effective way.

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