Good work! however, in some cases: persons should actually be people. so in your sentence "The girl is patient with other persons." i honestly believe that it would make more sense if you say "The girl is patient with other people." In your second sentence: "She like participate in activities of the school." you can either add the word "to" or at the end of participate, you can add the suffix "ing" at the end. so if you add to into your sentence it will look like: "She like to participate in activities of the school." if you add ing to participate in your sentence, it will look like: "She likes participating in activities of the school. In your second sentence, you don't have to put "of the school." you can put "school activites" or "school's activities." if you say school activities, then your sentence would be: "She like to participate in school activities." or "She likes participating in school activities. if you say "school's activities" you would get: "She likes to participate in the school's activities." or "she likes participating in the school's activities." in the last sentence, it should look like: "She is also creative, and loves dance folktore." there you go! let me know if you have any questions.