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What type of dream would you like to have? I guess that dream is an the most important things to do of life. But I also believe that there are some type of dreams that can't do any difference. I think that because I really believe that coletive dreams are the most important than individual dreams. I know that many people disagree, but what I'm trying to say is that when you have an individual dream, it is so good.... Only you, in general. But when you have a coletive dream its mean that you will need to divide with other people. How many people you can put together around of a dream, more biggest it will be for everyone. I hope one day can realize a dream like that!

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What type of dream would you like to have?

I guess that a dream is the most important thing to realize in life.  I also believe that there are some types of dreams that do not make any difference in our lives.  I really believe that collective dreams are more important than individual dreams.  I know that many people disagree, but what I am trying to say is that, when you have an individual dream, in general, it is good only for you.  However, when you have a collective dream, it means that you need to share it with other people.  The more people you share your dream with, the bigger the dream becomes for everyone.  I hope one day I can realize a dream like that!

 

I changed it, but tried to keep the spirit of what you wrote the same.

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