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Autumn. I supposed to write here something not important just to impove my English. How did these notes turn out to be my personal diary? It's easier to share my feelings with people who don't even know my real name. Nobody cares if I would say something stupid. I don't afraid to look like an idiot because it's not a big deal. I'm not that confident in real life, it's a shame. Okay, let's stop it right know. It's not interesting. Nothing cool happens in my life. I go to school, try not to fell asleep on physics test, then go home, do my homework and all the evening watch 'Friends'. I fell in love with 'Friends'. I'm kinda addicted to tv-series like this. What else? It's cold and cloudy. I love autumn, but I sometimes I miss summer so much. Autumn is beautiful. It's all green, yellow, and red, and other billion colours. It's the smell of rain in the air. It's green tea with jasmine and a lot of chocolate. It's books, and films, and a lot of favourite music in my headphones. It's my b-day in October. Yeah, the main reason why I love autumn. Thanks for reading. Have a nice day. P.S. I took this photo a few days ago. <3

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Autumn.

I'm supposed to write here something here not important just to impove my English. How did these notes turn out to be my personal diary?
It's easier to share my feelings with people who don't even know my real name. Nobody cares if I would say something stupid. I'm don't not afraid to look like an idiot because it's not a big deal. I'm not that confident in real life, and it's a shame.
Okay, let's stop it that right know. It's That's not interesting.
Nothing cool happens in my life. I go to school, try not to fall asleep on during the physics test, then go home, do my homework and all the evening watch 'Friends'. I fell in love with 'Friends'. I'm kinda addicted to TV series like this one.
What else? It's cold and cloudy. I love autumn, but I sometimes I miss summer so much.
Autumn is beautiful. It's all green, yellow, and red, and other billions of other colours. It's the smell of rain in the air. It's green tea with jasmine and a lot of chocolate. It's books, and films, and a lot of my favourite music playing in my headphones. It's my b-day in October. Yeah, that's the main reason why I love autumn.
Thanks for reading. Have a nice day.

P.S. I took this photo a few days ago. <3

 

Yes, I agree with Do, I like your style as well. :) Even if I don't correct every entry, I try to read everything you write and I'm sure if you keep it up you'll have lots and lots of fans on here, or something. You probably don't care about having "fans" but well you have one at least. :) Keep writing please, if not for us folks on italki then for your English which is sooo close to having no mistakes. And your photo is excellent! Thank you for sharing, "Ann"... :P

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Thank you! :)
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You're lucky, here in my city I can say we just have summer, it's very good sometimes but trust me, it can be annoying all the time. And who doesn't like Friends? o/ cool text :)
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i like your style :)

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